Saturday, July 30, 2005

New Grievous Update

Ok, I just updated Grievous's blog, it is Grievous's being accused of murder, and was wonderinf if you guys/girls could provide some feed back on the following areas:
1) should grievous's jedi hunts be in lawyer-like language or court scenes?
2) at the end of this case should i make a poll and let the viewers decide if he is guilty or not?
3) should the jury be people in this group or anonymous as it is so far
I hope you enjoy reading it!

8 Comments:

Blogger Leia said...

I think a poll would be cool.

July 30, 2005 10:04 PM  
Blogger Master Yoda said...

An interesting story so far!

I like the transcript idea. It lets us write outside our character for awhile, and gives third-person perspective for a change. Which is why I do it sometimes on the Yoda blog.

Polls are good for getting your readers involved and making your blog interactive. If your readers feel they can participate, they are more likely to come back, if only to see what the results of the poll was.

July 31, 2005 12:55 AM  
Blogger JawaJuice said...

Sounds like a cool idea. I like it.

July 31, 2005 1:02 AM  
Blogger General Grievous said...

Ok it is decided then, a poll will take place after all of the transcript is finished and published, probably the end of the week, it took me and hour to write this first part.

July 31, 2005 2:15 AM  
Blogger Jon the Intergalactic Gladiator said...

you can make it like Perry Mason. "Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, is it wrong for a cyborg to hunt down and destroy a man?"

July 31, 2005 9:55 PM  
Blogger Han Solo said...

Ladies and gentlemen of this supposed jury, I have one, final, thing I want you to consider. [walks to a display stand and pulls down a screen] Ladies and gentleman, this is Chew-bacca. Chewbacca is a Wookie from the planet Kashyyyk, but Chewbacca… LIVES …on the planet Endor. Now think about that. That does NOT MAKE SENSE.

Why would a Wookie, an eight-foot tall Wookie, want to live on Endor, with a bunch of two-foot tall Ewoks? That does NOT MAKE SENSE! But more important, you have to ask yourself: What does this have to do with this case? Nothing.

Ladies and gentlemen, it has nothing to do with this case! It does NOT MAKE SENSE! Look at me. I'm a lawyer and I'm talkin' about Chewbacca! Does that make sense? Ladies and gentlemen, I am not making any sense! None of this makes sense! And so you have to remember, when you're in that jury room deliberatin' and conjugatin' the Emancipation Proclamation, does it make sense? No! Ladies and gentlemen of this supposed jury, it does NOT MAKE SENSE! If Chewbacca lives on Endor, you must acquit! The defense rests.

August 01, 2005 1:21 AM  
Blogger General Grievous said...

I like it!!! can i use it?

August 01, 2005 4:02 AM  
Blogger General Grievous said...

part 2 is now up

August 02, 2005 4:45 AM  

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